perspective (2)
(cont'd) -and btw the characters in this story are purely fictional and not based on real life events, and the story is merely an exercise in writing and does not contain some serious crypted message
i look around the room and find sparks of interest everywhere. the sun is shining through the mud-splattered panes and i notice its rays gliding gently onto his shoulders. i look up, travel the length of the pulsating vein, the faint stubble on the chin, the corner of the mouth that lifts more the longer i stare. and then i meet the eyes. i look away at first but my eyes are surreptitiously drawn back. they are a deep dark brown. i remember my theory about dark brown eyes and intellect. his were pools of intellect, yet shaded with a knowledge they were not willing to share..
please tune in tomorrow for more instalments of the never-ending story, it's getting late tonite and i have blogfreeze
i look around the room and find sparks of interest everywhere. the sun is shining through the mud-splattered panes and i notice its rays gliding gently onto his shoulders. i look up, travel the length of the pulsating vein, the faint stubble on the chin, the corner of the mouth that lifts more the longer i stare. and then i meet the eyes. i look away at first but my eyes are surreptitiously drawn back. they are a deep dark brown. i remember my theory about dark brown eyes and intellect. his were pools of intellect, yet shaded with a knowledge they were not willing to share..
please tune in tomorrow for more instalments of the never-ending story, it's getting late tonite and i have blogfreeze

11 Comments:
do they kiss so they kiss?
By
Laila K, at Friday, March 24, 2006 7:31:00 AM
"(cont'd) -and btw the characters in this story are purely fictional and not based on real life events, and the story is merely an exercise in writing and does not contain some serious crypted message"
whatever floats your boat :)
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Dry Gin Martini, at Friday, March 24, 2006 8:50:00 AM
Laila I think they kiss.
By
Ghassan, at Friday, March 24, 2006 9:28:00 AM
i love it! can't wait for tomorrow
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Unknown, at Friday, March 24, 2006 10:18:00 AM
they kiss right there in the middle of the library like there's nooooo tomorrow, and then maria mercedes and antonio ride off into the sunset
LC..huh?? what's that supposed to mean?
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rouba, at Friday, March 24, 2006 11:59:00 AM
i remember this one. anta aw la a7ad :)
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Unknown, at Friday, March 24, 2006 12:14:00 PM
you reminded me of la vie en rose
'Des Yeux Qui Font Baisser Les Miens
Un Rire Qui Se Perd Sur Sa Bouche..'
makes you dream of a man like that
By
Unknown, at Friday, March 24, 2006 4:21:00 PM
oh and by the way my blog is PG 13 so don't expect anything steamier
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rouba, at Saturday, March 25, 2006 1:47:00 AM
well, i am disappointed by the fictional nature of the story--but you write nicely, none the less.
you should consider reading some poetry by Rilke. you may appreciate his approach to life/love. plus the germans always have an interesting style when they write.
"you who never arrived..." is excellent
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Anonymous, at Saturday, March 25, 2006 8:14:00 AM
I won't wait until you finish the story. I read all I needed to read. Plus who knows, you might not finish it :)
So this is to tell you that I love it. Especially the part before you see the guy... it has a little bit of Camus' L'etranger. You're really good rouba..
-Fouad
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Anonymous, at Saturday, March 25, 2006 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Fouad. I love writing, I find it easier to write things than to say them many a time. But hey, you're not so bad yourself! :)
By
rouba, at Tuesday, March 28, 2006 12:38:00 AM
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